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Endless Dreams

I had a Desert dream…

Devouring seedless Kalahari dates!

I journeyed through a hot sand-filled stream

Thirst burnt my throat… with passions of first love dates

Tossed by fighting dusts…I heard a whirlwind scream

On vampire rocks I landed…my dreams turned to slates

Together all pieces I glued…ready for  a new Oasis dream!

I had a Space dream…

Attending moon’s grand wedding in Mars!

I flew through clouds… playing hide and seek with sunbeam

Weeping rain blurred my vision of flirting stars

Bruised by floating ice… I craved for a blanket of steam

Blinded by a bully flash…a rogue thunder ruptured my old scars

My wounds I nursed…ready for a new Solar dream!

I had a Sea dream….

Swimming with dolphins amidst cheering corals!

Evading storms… explored depths starved of gleam

Hunted by sharks with blood-stained morals

Abused by drunken whales…far from rescue team

On a mucky shore my soul awoke…deformed as ghost murals

My frozen hands I warmed…ready for a new Transatlantic dream!

I had a Poetic dream…

Sculpturing lyrics of sonnets… painted with rhymes of a rainbow!

Mind hypnotized…I massaged my soul with an inspirational cream

Wild weeds of free verses broke in…dressed in rags of a scarecrow!

My pen glided in shock as a hacked classified live stream

On senseless stanzas… each reader frowned… like a broken bow

Wasted words I erased…ready for a new Shakespearean dream!

2011©Meshack Sewe

More of Meshack’s poems at www.awokensoul.blogspot.com

 

Discussion

3 Responses to “Endless Dreams”

  1. Lovely poem. Love the structure, just wonder why you put the last line in every stanza in bold. it’s a bit distracting.

    Posted by Dilman | July 4, 2011, 11:21 am
  2. Hmm….many thanks Dilma…my attempt is to bring some sort of “positive air” to neutralize the negative adventures described in each stanza…more like a punch line for each package of experiences…and yes I agree the bold lines are indeed distracting.

    Posted by Meshack Sewe(Awoken Soul) | July 5, 2011, 8:52 am
  3. Sewe, you are good at it. Keep up. It impressed me to the end.

    Posted by Brian | July 5, 2011, 12:21 pm

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