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Lord my Woman is Talking by Oluoch-Madiang’

Lord, my woman is talking
Give me four ears to hear her…

Lord my woman is talking and speaking
Give me six ears to listen to her…

Lord my woman is talking and speaking and saying things
Give me eight ears to understand her…

Give me more ears Lord.
She is saying this and that, that and this…
That I this and that she that.
Blah, blah, blah, my woman jabbers.

Lord she is saying that in 2004, January 4th, in the morning, at 9:30, I…
Lord, how does the morn of early 2004 matter today?
She is saying that I don’t listen, never give her ears…
Lord add me more ears I share with my woman!

Lord, my woman is speaking in tongues
About hair and love, pink and lollipop, black and forest, ooh and aah;

My woman, she says Tina is a bitch and Ali is a bitch and I bitch and…
Oh Lord, more ears please: my woman is bitching!

Lord lend me ten, twenty, thirty, hundred ears
(or cut off my woman’s tongues)
Quickly M’Lord, because my woman has just called to say…

We need to TALK! 

©Oluoch-Madiang’

31 comments on “Lord my Woman is Talking by Oluoch-Madiang’

  1. Akellove
    August 2, 2011

    LOL! Showing my boyfriend pap…

  2. ndinda
    August 2, 2011

    NIIICE!!

  3. Nkatha
    August 2, 2011

    Brilliant!

  4. Baru
    August 2, 2011

    Oluoch should open a website and put up this poem only…simple language that is not showy, good rhythm, i enjoyed i from start to end

  5. reena
    August 2, 2011

    that is soooo enjoyable

  6. Woozie_M
    August 2, 2011

    Lord, how does the morn of early 2004 matter today?

    How many men can relate to that line alone? Brilliant piece.

  7. Florence Onsando
    August 4, 2011

    Lovely piece. Interesting read

  8. Manuel Odeny
    August 7, 2011

    Brilliant, i smiled then said the poet is clever with words….nice finish.

  9. Wamathai
    August 8, 2011

    I can relate. Amazing piece.

  10. biskweet
    August 8, 2011

    Hilarious and mean at the same time, deep but easy to relate with. I love! Got me laughing like crazy! :D

  11. kevdanative
    August 8, 2011

    I like.
    Brilliant and relational.
    Cheers

  12. livie_livia
    August 8, 2011

    enjoyable read.

  13. madiang
    August 10, 2011

    Most appreciated all of you…@ Baru, try me at http://madiang.blogspot.com/

  14. madiang
    August 11, 2011

    Additionally…check out http://madiang.wordpress.com/

  15. Evelyne
    August 11, 2011

    I like, I like, I like. It’s so real.

  16. Mummy Tales
    August 12, 2011

    Nice one maddo. Very familiar with both female and male folks.

  17. veehcirra
    August 12, 2011

    Now that’s too funny! Great piece :)

  18. gerra
    August 12, 2011

    i can totaly relate to this..al day blah blah blah..funny read.

  19. Sidney
    August 13, 2011

    Madiang, you r gud

  20. macharia
    August 14, 2011

    madiang your woman needs to use up all the words in her cheeks daily.Enjoyed the easy wit and humour.

  21. Oluoch-Madiang's Poetry
    August 15, 2011

    @ macharia…flog the poem, not the poet (blame the game, not the player). Madiang’ has no comment and has no woman! Lol! Glad you enjoyed. :-)

  22. Luiny Malou
    August 16, 2011

    It’s a great work bro’

  23. mgema
    August 23, 2011

    Hahaha! This ones a killer, very good diction.

  24. Emaqlet
    November 12, 2011

    LO..LO…LOL!!!:-D Simply sweet! Cheerz!

  25. Sila
    November 21, 2011

    Wow very touching.

  26. Kevin Orato
    March 19, 2012

    I was privileged to listen to this one out loud with all the vocal inflection required to deliver it’s impact. It’s as good written as when I heard it.

  27. Beatrix
    July 17, 2012

    This is a great read!!

  28. Emmy Ruth
    January 8, 2013

    A good one!very hilarious :)

  29. Espoirkins
    August 22, 2013

    hahhahhahahhaha…..i died with laughter.. this is a good unique piece. frustrations of a man trying to keep up with his woman jibberish

  30. pundi
    January 24, 2014

    nice nice!!

  31. Wanga F.D.O
    January 27, 2014

    Good. Very very good. Very true of all the descendants of Eve!

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