I was hoping
You would see inside my mind
So I wouldn’t have to say a word
I was hoping
You could read my expression
And tell me the words I so longed to hear
I was hoping
My feelings were hidden
Behind my face that is an open book
I was hoping
You wouldn’t see the tears
That threatened to teeter down the edge of my eyes
I was hoping
You would understand my need for pride; for dignity
But here we are
Words said
Feelings unsaid.
©Shiro Njagi
This poem is part of the April 4th 2011 Freedom Poetry Competition. You have until April 29th 2011 to read and vote for it. Please comment and indicate your opinion of the poem on a scale of 1 to 5.
i like the contradictions running through unsaid. so true that words sometimes mask feelings.interesting that the speaker expected us to be mindreaders and decipher unspoken emotions.my vote 4
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